You make me happy, that's nothing new.
So in love I am with you.
Almost 2 years together, can hardly believe it.
A future together, I know we'll achieve it.
I know we're young and we have a ways to go.
But for you I'd walk a thousand miles to and fro.
Young love, puppy love people may think.
We work out through fights, surpass any kinks.
We are in love, I know its true.
Yes I know, I love you.
This is a nice lovey poem and the love seems to be there between you and your partner. It is however, very direct. You can show the love without directly saying "i love you, i know it's true" show the reader a way it is true without just saying it. Maybe you can compare him to something YOU love to truly show the amount of love that is there. Play with the wording a bit and let the lines flourish from your mind.
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